2014-15 AP Composition Blog
Wednesday, April 22, 2015
Transcendentalism is the belief that every individual is capable of doing the right thing if they rely on themselves and distrust organizations that attempt to control them. I would identify as a transcendentalist. I believe that governments' purposes are honorable in their intention, but they have become too much of a comfort object for humans. They are corruptible and many times only seek to maintain power, and this poisons the communal spirit of society instead of fostering it. Religion, again is honorable in its purpose, but it assimilates people into reestablished groups, and eliminates from them their freedom of mind.
I believe that government in particular sets limits on people, preventing them from reaching their potential and fulfilling their sense of identity. People spend their lives making money and working jobs in order to pay taxes that support their government. The government regulates money, which is what the people are forced to obtain in order to survive. They cannot truly rely on themselves when they must constantly feed this system. It is like applying their own life support. They rely on the government, rather than solely themselves.
Religion does not conflict with transcendentalism as directly as government does, but its assimilation of people into established thought groups destroys their freedom of mind, and as a result, their individualism. It is possible to be a religious transcendentalist, but only if the religion is what the individual truly wants to follow. Even in this case, limits are set upon individualism. The mind's future growth is inhibited even if the present state is fulfilled. They answer to another power rather than themselves, and this treads upon their sense of individualism. I identify as a transcendentalist because I do not want limits set upon my mind.
Sunday, February 1, 2015
Bowling for Columbine
I believe that Michael Moore made a very strong argument in Bowling for Columbine. America has the most gun related deaths in the world, and Moore has gathered substantial evidence as to why this is so. An inherent fear in the American culture has driven many Americans to use guns for protection. Celebrities who support the use of firearms set an example for the rest of the country to follow. For these reasons, the number of gun-related deaths in America dwarfs that of any other country.
Moore believed that the American public had always harbored a certain degree of fear. America, regarded as a melting pot around the world, also proved to be a breeding ground for tension and fear between the races. This tension has boiled over many times. The discovery of Native Americans already living in the New World, the mistreatment of slaves during the 1800’s, and the actions of the Ku Klux Klan during the Civil Rights Movement were examples of the inherent fear resulting in violent actions.
The fear demonstrated by these events is still present in America today. It was exposed when Moore visited the house of James Nichols in Michigan. Nichols’ brother, Terry, was a conspirator in the 1995 bombing of Oklahoma City.
James slept with a gun under his pillow at night. He claimed that he did it so that he would be able to defend himself in case an intruder broke in. James claimed that there were some “wackos” in the world and that one could never be too prepared. This type of paranoia and mistrust has often resulted in an Americans being more than willing to use guns.
Moore also explored some of the reasons the gun culture in America has become so big. One such reason was the popularity of gun-toting celebrities, including Charlton Heston. Heston, a Hollywood movie star, was one of the NRA’s most valuable voices. He had given pro-gun speeches in Littleton, Colorado, and in Mount Morris Township, Michigan. These speeches came mere days after shootings occurred at the Columbine and Buell schools in each respective town. The speeches helped quell the surge of anti-gun sentiment that had been unleashed by the shootings. Heston’s fame attracted many followers, and many gun enthusiasts were encouraged by his speeches. A big reason for the rise of gun usage in America is the example set by our gun-toting celebrities.
Michael Moore’s Bowling for Columbine presented a very convincing argument for stricter gun control laws. The inherent fear and tension between the different ethnicities in America created a society where the use of a deadly weapon was the first reaction for many people. The weapons themselves were promoted by celebrities such as Charlton Heston, who acted as a spokesperson for the NRA, attracting many new supporters for the association. The number of gun deaths in America continues to grow, and Bowling for Columbine highlighted excellent reasons for why this was so, and why change was needed.
Wednesday, November 5, 2014
Irrational Fear
Pain
Being a
cross country runner, swimmer, and track runner, I am very used to pain. I deal
with it every day in these sports. This kind of pain doesn’t bother me, but a
different kind of pain, the kind that I don’t intend to feel, is one of my
worst fears. Pain comes in varying degrees, both emotional and physical. Pain
is a growling phobia of mine. It now affects me at a much deeper level than it
did throughout my childhood.
Involuntary
pain in my bones and muscles that I may have ignored growing up now demands my
full attention. When a painful stimulus sends a jolt through my body, and, I
panic. I have always been able to overcome this panic quickly, but this has
also made me realize my worst fear: someday I may feel a pain so bad that I
cannot quell the panic, go insane.
When I
was young, the thought of pain rarely crossed my mind. I did a flip off a five-meter
platform into a pool at age eleven. I jumped to the ground from over ten feet
up on play structures at the park when I was seven. I rode my Razor scooter
around at skate parks, braving every ramp no matter how tall or steep it was. I
thought doing dangerous things made me look tougher in the eyes of my friends,
and, especially, in the eyes of girls. As I have grown older I realize that I
probably inspired more worry than awe out of both parties.
Physically,
I have subjected myself to most of the pain I have felt. Grueling workouts have
left my body practically numb to the pain that comes with them. The pain they
bring is tolerable because I know it is temporary. It also brings a small token
of relief. I feel myself getting in shape as I work out, so more pain means
more gain.
Emotional
pain is much harder to manage. I have lost some good friends, and I remember
how powerful and terrible the pain was. I felt lost, angry, confused, and sad
for a long time. Only time can heal emotional wounds. There is no
straightforward healing process. This makes it very hard to deal with, and I dread
the possibility of it happening.
Sometimes,
though, the mental and physical callouses that I have built up are breached.
Any time somebody close to me dies, the emotional pain is too great for me to
handle at once. The grief hits me in waves, spreading the pain over time to
minimize its toll as much as possible.
I have
yet to encounter any pain that I have not been able to overcome, but I have
imagined what it might be like. The following scenario is the scariest
“The
injury does not immediately register. The pain, a tidal wave of it, is held at
bay by the shock, which will soon fade away. All I know is that I will never be
able to use my leg again. This realization makes me sick with emotional agony
as well. Having led an active lifestyle, this injury will turn my life upside
down. My leg hangs limp like a sock without a foot in it, completely shattered.
I sit
in the middle of nowhere, my car had had a flat tire, and I had made a stupid
mistake and tried to turn. This made it worse. I would now have to live the
rest of my life knowing that this could have been avoided and it was squarely
my fault.
The car
had barrel rolled, and my leg had been smashed against the underside of the
dashboard. I had crawled out of the car, which was now lying on its roof. My
cell phone had no service.
The
shock started to wear off. The pain starts increasing, slowly at first, then,
after I shift my position slightly, becomes unbearable. I scream desperately,
yelling for help, my panic only growing because I know that nobody will hear
me. The pain continues to increase and I start yelling crazy things,
desperately shouting prayers that will never be answered. I involuntarily
convulse, bringing the pain up yet another notch.
I
become irrational. All coherent thoughts disappear from my mind, and I lose
touch with reality. I blindly inch along the road away from my car, knowing
that I will tear the skin off of my arms and torso in the process. I have no
idea where I am going, but am too driven mad by pain to care.
This
situation itself is irrational. If I ever do have a flat tire, I will slow down
and pull over as I have been instructed to. The danger in the equation will
immediately be snuffed out. Despite reassurance that this scenario is of the
utmost unlikeliness, I still have qualms about dangerous activities that could
result in pain. The possibility of pain is present in any situation, and to
this day I am very critical of what I do, analyzing the activity to avoid
bringing any pain upon myself. Twelve year-old Sam will always hold my personal
record for the highest ramp ever conquered on a scooter. Eighteen year-old Sam
wants no part of that.
Monday, September 1, 2014
Philomena
Philomena Lee’s story is a very
powerful one. The book hollows the life of Michael A. Hess an adopted child
born in Ireland and raised in America. Anthony Lee was born an illegitimate
child to Philomena Lee in Ireland. Philomena and Anthony were placed in the
Sean Ross Abbey, Ireland’s dumping ground for illegitimate children and
mothers. There, Philomena toiled in the hot, badly ventilated laundry
department for three years while simultaneously raising her child. She was
coerced into giving up her child for adoption when he was three years old. Stripped
from his mother and renamed for his adoptive father, Mike gradually adjusts to
American life while Philomena attempts to find out what happened to him back in
Ireland. Mike leads a very interesting life, and he proves that the bond
between a mother and child can never truly be broken.
Mike faces hardships from the
moment he sets foot in America. His adoptive brothers and father were not very
accepting, and he suppressed every qualm he had with them for years in an
attempt to fit in. Finally, he could not take it anymore. He began to argue
with his father, paid his way through law school after his father refused to
back him. Mike was a devoted Catholic, but he was very conflicted, and
eventually shied away from church activities after finally admitting that he
was a homosexual. He grew up masking his true self, eventually rising very high
in the ranks of the Republican Party. This caused him even more conflict. His
friends who knew of his sexual orientation questioned his reasons for working
for the very party that sought to strip him of his rights. Mike defended
himself, but the conflict only drove him crazier. Mike faced unknown attachment
disorder after being separated from his mother. This showed when he cheated on
several of his lovers and eventually contracted HIV because of it. Mike
survived for two years with the virus while trying to find his mother. He was
unsuccessful and died with the only comfort being that he would eventually see
her in the afterlife.
I personally think the story is a
very powerful one. Martin Sixsmith, the author, did a fantastic job uncovering
the details of this story; he incorporated them flawlessly into the book. The
details were not pretty, often grotesque, but they allowed me to form a clear
image of the horrors that Philomena and Mike were subjected to. I often found
myself yelling at the book when Mike or some other character did something
stupid or cruel. I t has been a long time since a book has grabbed me like this
one did. It was an eye opening experience. Now I have learned just what being
stripped of an ordinary childhood can do to people. Looking deeper into people,
I have become a more tolerant person. That never would have happened without
this book.
If Men Could Menstruate, The Great Lawsuit: Man versus Men. Woman versus Women
Attention
has been called to a problem that has taken a back seat to many movements
throughout history and it is high time that this was rectified. Women have been
oppressed throughout history, and although the oppression is not as bad today
as in centuries past, it is still a problem. Women are still at a disadvantage
at home, in the workplace, and in politics. The disadvantage comes not from any
lack of qualification; it comes simply through prejudice.
Margaret Fuller addresses the
problem of men taking advantage of the work of women in The Great Lawsuit: Man versus Men. Woman versus Women. “We will not
speak of the innumerable instances in which profligate or idle men live upon
the earnings of industrious wives.” This statement sums up the story Sweat told by Zora Neale Hurston. Women,
such as Delia, will toil and support the family while the men, like Sykes, sit
around and take advantage of their earnings.
In the workplace, women have
historically been at a disadvantage. Politifact.com states that women make
77 cents for every dollar a man earns. Men earn almost 25% more money for doing
the same job as women. That is not right. In politics, women are again
prejudiced against. When Nancy Pelosi became the Speaker of the House, history
was made. She was the first woman ever to be elected to a position that was
over 200 years old. The Executive Branch has the office of First Lady. The
title of this office automatically assumes that a man will be president and
that his wife or appointee will assume the spot. No woman has ever been elected
president, and there has never been a First Man. This has been a statistic that
only aids the prejudice.
Gloria Steinem’s If Men Could Menstruate calls attention
to the fact that men have rigged society to benefit themselves more so than
their woman counterparts. Women bear the brunt of having a child. They carry
the fetus for nine months. They give birth. They menstruate every month. Yet
despite all this, society is still not equal. This piece of literature also
points out that it is a perfectly correctible situation. It just requires
slightly different thinking from members of society. “The truth is that, if men
could menstruate, the power justifications would go on and on. If we let them.”
People in society are perfectly capable of making the necessary changes to promote
equality. All that remains is to make it happen.
Is Google Making Us Stupid?
“Google it.” This phrase is one of
the most repeated in the entire English language. I hear it on a daily basis.
Computers, phones, and technology everywhere are becoming very powerful, and
the developments are only increasing in speed. It is a very good societal question
that Nicholas Carr addresses in “Is Google Making us Stupid?” Is technology
good or bad for the advancement of human society? For me, the pros of the
advanced technology far outweigh the cons.
Technology is quickly becoming the
glue that holds our world together. People call each other on cell phones. They
use electronic calendars. Even digital books are gradually library books. These
all allow the transfer of knowledge to happen more quickly. Instead of going
into a building or using the nearest phone booth, a person can pull out their
cell phone and dial a number as quickly as they want to. Smartphones often come
with calendar apps, so replacing a paper calendar every year and remembering to
turn the pages becomes a thing of the past. The production of digital books
saves trees as no paper is required. No longer do we have to wait for our local
libraries to obtain a book. We can just buy it online.
Carr brings up his fear that
machines will soon be doing more thinking than humans will. I disagree with
this statement. He mentions that when Johannes Gutenberg invented the printing
press, it caused some people to denounce it as demeaning to the intelligence of
men. This technology rendered the writing of books by hand obsolete. It was a
new invention, but society became more advanced along with it. I believe that
the same thing is happening today. The printing press was rendered obsolete,
and now new computers constantly render old ones obsolete. I believe that the
human mind is evolving along with these new machines. New research is
constantly used to produce greater and greater technology. The mind of a human
invents every new development in the technology world. The development of the
human mind is linked with the development of technology and they will continue
to develop at the same pace.
The Ethics of Living Jim Crow
Richard Wright’s The Ethics of Living Jim Crow is a piece
of literature that provides an inside look at the true horrors that African
Americans had to endure during the years when the Jim Crow system went
unchecked. The story provides shocking details and drives home how much courage
civil rights leaders and workers showed in the years both during and
surrounding the movement. I often wondered as I read this what role I would
have taken were I in Wright’s shoes during his childhood and young adulthood.
As the story developed, I realized what that path would have been.
Richard Wright recalls some very
vivid details from his past. The story opens up on him getting hit by a broken
milk bottle during a cinder fight. Rather than showing sympathy, his mother
scolds him and beats him. She wants him to take the submissive route and
succumb to the Jim Crow laws.
This made Richard angry, but later he realized that his mother only wanted him to be safe once he left the house. Years later, his mother’s advice proved itself to be wise. He was l stopped by police and white citizens alike and harassed. They tried to make him submit and keep Jim Crow alive. Sometimes they even held him at gunpoint. “They climbed out of the car, guns drawn, faces set, and advanced slowly.” Wright’s details capture the essence and the terror felt by all African Americans during the Jim Crow years.
This made Richard angry, but later he realized that his mother only wanted him to be safe once he left the house. Years later, his mother’s advice proved itself to be wise. He was l stopped by police and white citizens alike and harassed. They tried to make him submit and keep Jim Crow alive. Sometimes they even held him at gunpoint. “They climbed out of the car, guns drawn, faces set, and advanced slowly.” Wright’s details capture the essence and the terror felt by all African Americans during the Jim Crow years.
Reading this story really made me
think about what I would have done if I had been an African American growing up
during this time period. Immediately I though that I would have kept my head
down, been submissive, and avoided danger and conflict as much as possible.
However, as I read more, I realized that this would only add fuel to the Jim
Crow fire.
The whole goal of the oppressive southern society was to make the African Americans feel like they were inferior to the white people. The white people bullied them and harassed them. The African Americans were discriminated against in the workplace and often couldn’t find jobs. At night, the KKK terrorized them, harassing them and even lynching them sometimes.
I think that if I were alive during this time, I would have joined the Civil Rights Movement. I would have placed articles in newspapers and tried to speak up for my own rights. I realize that this would be the most dangerous path, but it is also the one that made the most difference and eventually caused the Jim Crow society to collapse. I admire the bravery of leaders like Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. and Rosa Parks. They helped promote non-violent resistance and helped eventually make the difference they wanted to. I would want to be like them.
The whole goal of the oppressive southern society was to make the African Americans feel like they were inferior to the white people. The white people bullied them and harassed them. The African Americans were discriminated against in the workplace and often couldn’t find jobs. At night, the KKK terrorized them, harassing them and even lynching them sometimes.
I think that if I were alive during this time, I would have joined the Civil Rights Movement. I would have placed articles in newspapers and tried to speak up for my own rights. I realize that this would be the most dangerous path, but it is also the one that made the most difference and eventually caused the Jim Crow society to collapse. I admire the bravery of leaders like Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. and Rosa Parks. They helped promote non-violent resistance and helped eventually make the difference they wanted to. I would want to be like them.
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